???? E. ??? South, near the U. stadium.
May 17th
8 pm 'til...TBA
Mixed and virgin drinks available
Chocolate (dark and milk)
Maybe, and occasional Irish Car Bomb
See ya there,
Adam, aka. Yimmy, Yim, hairy Adam
Hey,
Yay! Can we bring "guests"? Melissa's beau, Will, is a great fan of
the ol' Car Bomb.
Good to see you today. Plan on seeing you tomorrow!
Yay! Can we bring "guests"? Melissa's beau, Will, is a great fan of
the ol' Car Bomb.
Good to see you today. Plan on seeing you tomorrow!
Tif
Tif,
Hell yeah, friends are definitely welcome!! Any friend of a car bomb
is a friend of mine* (some restrictions apply, see below for details).
Tomorrow, 5-5:30ish. 23someting'-er-other South and West Temple (west
side of the road).
Glad to hear you're feeling better and I'll see ya tomorrow.
Yim
*Postal employees, over-the-top religious nuts, mummies & Amway reps.
Yim,
Count me in. I'll put it on my calendar, but would also appreciate a
reminder email as we get a little closer (don't want to miss it).
Mitch
Thanks Adam, it sounds good. See you then!
Liz
Heck yes, I can send a reminder!
I hear you're on two wheels these days...have pictures? I'm still in
love with the Stella scooters (with the side car, of course). Always
looking for a rival scooter.
Take care,
Yim
Hello there Mitch,
Two days out from a tequila whore's bash! Thurs is rapidly
approaching...ya ready?
Yim
Two days out from a tequila whore's bash! Thurs is rapidly
approaching...ya ready?
Yim
One more thought...I don't a current number for you. For that matter,
neither does Liz. I tried to call a couple of times, but never think
about telephone numbers when I'm on the computer. Anyway, please don't
let me forget on Thurs.
Thanks,
Yim
hey,
Let me give you my new cell number.
867-5309. (# courtesy of Tommy Two Tone)
Hello again,
TW's bash tomorrow night is short a blender. Can anyone help out? Oh
yeah, and shot glasses; can't forget the shot glasses.
List on-hand:
3 bottles Strawberry Daq. mix
1 bottle Bailey's
1 bottle Jameson Irish
1 bottle Jose Q
8 pints fresh strawberries
1 lb Ghir. 60% chocolate
1 lb Ghir. milk chocolate
Anything else you would like to bring is, by all means, welcome!!
See ya tomorrow,
Adam (Yimmy, Yim, H. Adam)
TW's bash tomorrow night is short a blender. Can anyone help out? Oh
yeah, and shot glasses; can't forget the shot glasses.
List on-hand:
3 bottles Strawberry Daq. mix
1 bottle Bailey's
1 bottle Jameson Irish
1 bottle Jose Q
8 pints fresh strawberries
1 lb Ghir. 60% chocolate
1 lb Ghir. milk chocolate
Anything else you would like to bring is, by all means, welcome!!
See ya tomorrow,
Adam (Yimmy, Yim, H. Adam)
Adam!
I'd love,love to be there, but plans have changed and we're staying in Mendocino County another couple days, coming back on Saturday. The living is GOOD out here! Kevin's diving for abalone as much as he can, possibility of salmon fishing tomorrow(we went last week, but only got one, this week word is their biting!), good wine, good beer, good other things, good people, good mountain biking, insane hiking, incredible scenery.
However. I am fond of tequila. So sad to miss this party, originally we would have gotten back into town just in time. I hope you have another one.
Love, HannahYim,
Do need me to bring ice or anything like that? Let me know. I'll try to
swing by the store for a snack to share.
See you tonight.
Do need me to bring ice or anything like that? Let me know. I'll try to
swing by the store for a snack to share.
See you tonight.
Liz
8 comments:
An interesting topic with humorous tidbits within the conversation. I'd like to see more of a conclusion to what's being built up--your comments or something. Tie it up at the end so that there's some closure to this conversation
I really like the casual style that it is written in. Even with the grammatical errors, it easy to read and understand, and it gives it a realistic kind of raw feeling.
I thought it was a great post, very fun to read. It sounds like a great party.
I like the idea of adding commentary. It could be fun to hear about each of the people responding to the email, who they are, what kind of person they are, etc, etc.
Great job.
Very fun post... to bad we weren't invited.
Everything was very easy to follow with the exception of your many names, somehow I missed that first time through.
Any background or casual comments about the people involved either before their email or after could add some more depth.
I thought this was very interesting. I would like to see you leave the emails raw. Don't change any of the grammatical errors. I also think that this piece would be really cool if you actually did the commentary yourself. Personally, I like hearing what the author or composer is thinking.
Sounds like it was going to be a great party with some interesting people attending. When you do your revision, I would like to learn more about these individuals with the comments you insert. Something that would give me insight as to why they write certain things. For example, the guy who asks for a reminder. Doesn't he have a calendar that he can write on?
Excellent choice. This was a very fun conversation to drop into. I am looking forward to reading your commentary and how you choose to elaborate on what is happening, should you choose to.
Also, I would like you to go about formatting intentionally. How are you going to comment? Different colored text? Italics? Parens? They will all have a different effect on the flow of the conversation... unlike quotes there is no standard here, so be prepared to speak to why you chose to format it the way you did.
Sectioned by color, but still needs more. Add commentary, photos, etc. Make it consistent, ex. single or double spaced...choose 1. Explain names.
I agree with Jeanette, there does need to be some closure.
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